People today do not feel safe either at home or when they are out. What are the causes? What are the solutions?
Safety has become a serious problem nowadays, with people feeling secure neither at home or outside in the cities. this essay will discuss the possible causes of this phenomenon and suggest a viable solution.
The principal problem with feeling of unsafe is to be found in the rising rates of criminality and delinquency, for the most part in bigger cities. Today, it is becoming very easy to perform any kind of robbery, from physical assault or breaking and entering to electronic fraud and identity theft. The result to this is people not feeling safe in any place and not trusting anyone, sometimes even becoming overprotective and impolite. One example could be door-to-door vendors, who encounter an important number of rude people during their working days because most of the time they are mistaken for possible burglars and get kicked out.
A solution to this worrying problem could be government authorities increasing the years of penalty for lawbreakers and implementing their patrolling schemes. This way, those who engage in robbery and theft might start to get arrested for long periods of time. Another example of a solution can be more surveillance cameras being installed around cities and residential areas, on train and buses and other public transport systems in order to be able to catch more thieves.
In summary, the fear of being victims of assaults or robberies has its reasons, and this can be allayed by putting more effort into the fight against crime by the Government Authorities. it is proven that the more efficient laws are applied, the lower the criminality rate will be.
- Computer technologies are more accessible and cheaper, as the result, more adults work at home and children study at home. Is this a positive or negative development? 84
- The diagram below show how glass containers, such as bottles, are produced and recycled. 78
- Sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas (1999 & 2004) 78
- in some countries younger people are losing interest in teaching proffesion why is this happening what can be done to improve the situation 84
- The maps show the village park 10 years ago and the village car park now 96
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, in summary, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08301886792 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67007199207 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3390588564 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.454545455 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0909090909 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114024429036 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436649857838 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459424763898 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697897316368 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567517782172 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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