‘People who do not use social media networks will always fall behind in career development
opportunities.’
To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction?
Being familiar with social media is going to be an imperative skill in the new era. It has been argued whether applying them take a special place in career improvement or not. I personally am in the favor of importance of using these media.
These days working with a computer as well as applying social media is going to occupy a huge space in human’s life. In my perspective, it is crucial getting to know them since when it comes to work, without any doubt, those who can implement Apps like Facebook, Twitter and Instagram can simply win the opportunity of having closer contact with their colleagues, clients as well as other people around the world. Moreover, web experts are considered the successful hunters of enormous vacant job positions through these applications, who can work much faster than their rivals. Take Indeed application as an example, in term of job searching it is revealed one of the most efficient medium worldwide. Finally, in comparison to looking through Ads in a newspaper, social media are by far more convenient, rapid and target-oriented.
Although, other people who can not implement computer and network are still remaining in the race by means of using traditional methods such as TV commercials and Newspaper advertisements, but these pathways are more demanding and time-consuming than Internet browsers.
In conclusion, I would not like to totally degrade person who is not able or do not want to apply new technologies, but as having discussed earlier, I personally think that old-fashioned employers will not be able to compete with media users in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04868913858 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95465503797 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621722846442 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.4164784108 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.8 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171344110546 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063088185748 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326445233403 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986307702428 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220979565219 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.