Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?
There are concerns about plastic products used daily, such as bags, bottles, and other similar things in many countries. While it is argued about what the demerits of plastics on the environment are, I believe that citizens and the authorities should take some possible measures to tackle those issues.
There is no denying that the environment suffers from significant drawbacks when humans regularly produce and use plastics. It is widely assumed that deforestation is occurring at an alarming rate, one of which is associated with plastic products, which are difficult to dispose of. This means that humans tend to cut down more wood to build new landfills, leading to the loss of habitats for native animals and plants. Furthermore, plastic products are likely to have negative effects on food chains, particularly on aquatic creatures. If plastic waste is thrown away, poor species will accidentally swallow it, thus not recognizing that it is not food.
However, each person and their state office should take potential actions to minimize those damaging consequences. Firstly, the government could foster citizens’ awareness of environmental protection by limiting the use of plastic products and banning deforestation. Besides, they are able to introduce new rules, such as applying new taxes on using or manufacturing plastic products, helping reduce the amount of plastic generated. Finally, waste, including plastic, should be gathered and processed by chemicals to avoid the chance for animals to eat it.
In conclusion, I personally find some solutions to address the demerits of plastic products in nature, such as promoting knowledge in the community or processing them carefully before throwing them away. If humans had no actions, there would no longer be a wonderful environment with green forests and innocent species in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44636678201 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87190978379 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650519031142 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2299000296 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300522268062 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952989443366 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462474951192 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171948055062 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436550384529 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.