In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In contemporary life, many a young adult in some countries opts to continually live under the roof with their parents, although they graduate and find suitable jobs. From my perspective, this trend contains several advantages that can affect their life and their society in the future.
Should they choose to live with their parents, this tendency may have a detrimental impact on their life. Since they may not have well- prepared experiences to confront all difficulties that they will face in the future. For example, a young adult has lived with their parents since he or she was young. This means that they are well protected by their parents and they do not pay any attention to financial burdens. Finally, they could not accumulate any intangible assets for their own family in the future or they do not have any assets used to tackle any incidents when they get. Therefore, only when they still live with their parents will they be immature in their mindset.
Besides, this trend may create several problems for their own community. If other youngsters may imitate their lifestyle, the housing market will be affected in the future. To be specific, once plenty of young people choose not to buy any houses leading to the corruption of the real estate market. In addition, in their own community, it turns up a vast majority of immature adults who can not organize and solve their problems by themselves. As a result, their society converts into a chaotic world. Above all, this trend may have directly deleterious impacts on their society that can become a big mess.
In a nutshell, the trend of living with parents of young adults has disadvantages for not only their life but also their society in the future that they can predict and have an ability to avoid.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86184210526 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46267145444 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519736842105 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0877941815 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2666666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331696772725 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129077004744 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874032400468 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230132913258 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799028200371 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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