some employers want to be also to cantact their staff at the time even on holidays
A holiday is not a holiday, without plenty of a freedom and fun.One of the most controversial issues today relates to some employers to be also to contact their staff in holidays.In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
On one side of argument, there are people who argue that the disadvantages considerably outweigh its advantage.The main reason for beleiving this is that people work office or industries over time and people do not sleep and relax also with this burden increase on the mind.It is unproductive for worker and employees.It is also posdible to say that privacy of fhe people and with this increase the family problem.People not manage the time with parents, wife ,and children also with this affair in the family.A particularly best epitome of this survey conduct by one university and see that with this many problem problem create in the family.
Secondly,there are many advantages of this statement.With this increase the productivity of company and increase the sale of the company.The company gain more porfit.For instance,there are one company conduct the survey and see some company does not holidays of the worker and employees also see that the company make the more thinks.With this increase the sale and gain more profit.
In conclusion, there are number of answers to this questions.One balance, however, Itend to believd that the companies provide holidays of the staff for relax and time spend with the family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09836065574 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88964363058 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516393442623 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.842421463 49.4020404114 352% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 311.0 106.682146367 292% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.0 20.7667163134 294% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149404418689 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116126422274 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798194404784 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116126422274 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798194404784 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.1 13.0946893788 253% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 50.2224549098 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 11.3001002004 240% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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