some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
The importance of giving freedom to children of their choices, which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others are reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the Former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive and negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
Analysing the statement and explaining further, the first and the foremost reason behind this is that people do not like to give permission to their adolescents for choosing a regular basis because they think it can be harmful to them. For instance, if they had their own choices, they would not be in communication with their friends easily. In this term, young people just think about themselves, however, their friends have some expectations namely working together, and asking for their help to buy suitable clothes.Categorically discussion, it cannot be ignored that the main reason behind this is that fathers want to invade their privacy and interpret their interest because they thought that it can be helpful for their future activity.
Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reasons stems from the fact is that some mothers think that it can be better to give them a space for everyday matters, The offspring can be affected by the society in which they are living. for example, if they purchase the food based on their interests, they can make important decisions including a university subject. Moving further, it is pertinent to mentioned that making good decisions can help them to improve their confidence in the future. as a result , when they work for a company, they can reach a high level of position because of self-confidence. Apart from the reasons Mentioned above it can be clearly stated why some people are in favour of this trend.
To recapitulate, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of this given trends are indeed too great to ignore. Their are several drawbacks it has that can be easily overweight by some appropriate solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, thus, while, apart from, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10215053763 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83421511851 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545698924731 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.6845388397 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.571428571 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219806905477 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788379209373 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599211717741 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125011948482 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660842797544 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.