some people believe that a great difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial
Nowadays, it is that some people believe that a great difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial. I completely agree that is gives more positive than negative for sam reasons.
In the one hand, the advantage of this issue is to better teach parents and children a how to resolve differences. it is because, in the difference there will certainly be a lot of selfishness. For example, in some countries such as Korea many young people want to live independently, but also many parents do not allow it. As a result, many young people become more to independent because parents who think it is better to reduce their selfishness a having to fight with the child.
And on one side again, the disadvantage of this issue is can trigger a fight between a child and parents. it is due to child and parents more concerned with their own selfishness. Like an example, in Indonesia many young people are not serious in their studies because they think that their lives will continue to be controlled by their parents opinions. And the result, many young people do not care about their parents and become defiant children.
In my opinion, parents and children must be more able to appreciate differences from each other and weigh more whether the wishes of parents will be better than the wishes of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82969432314 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64229309161 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506550218341 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2682924191 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.545454545 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389887006455 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164638236605 0.084324248473 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.198886521299 0.0667982634062 298% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27909618529 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.152388847603 0.056905535591 268% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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