Some people believe that having a conversation on a mobile phone in a public or crowded place should be banned. Others feel that we should be able to talk wherever we like. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is considered by some that making a phone call in public areas, for instance at libraries and train stations, should be prohibited, while there are others who think people should talk wherever they like. In my opinion, except for making phone calls in certain areas which require a quiet ambient like libraries should definitely be banned, people can still talk via phone at most places.
On the one hand, many find that it is often frustrating when a person around them is having a conversation through mobile phones. This is to say, most people can be easily disturbed and lose their concentration under such circumstances especially those callers often speak in high volume. Therefore, banning phone calls in public areas can return the people a quiet environment they wish for.
On the other hand, the use of phones, especially phone calling is inevitable nowadays. For instance, when a person is required to receive a phone call for important matters from their supervisor in public, they will still take the call anyway, since the consequences of declining the phone call can be destructive for them. For this reason, prohibiting phone calls in public is unreasonable as it is highly inconvenient for most people.
Finally, in my opinion, it is unnecessary to ban people from phone calling because most people are capable of considering their situation spontaneously. In other words, people usually could think whether their situation are suitable to start a conversation or not, for instance in libraries, people would not even whisper if they are situated there. Although there are minorities who are careless, reminding them usually could stop them from disturbing others.
To conclude, while prohibition of the phone calling in public can be implemented in certain areas, most places aren't necessary to do so as most people can consider the factors comprehensively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun find seems to be countable; consider using: 'many finds'.
Suggestion: many finds
...one at most places. On the one hand, many find that it is often frustrating when a per...
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Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...plemented in certain areas, most places arent necessary to do so as most people can c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, finally, if, so, still, therefore, while, except for, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81352742588 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537704918033 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.6693277813 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.166666667 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234467605348 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987084943756 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730626458892 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142446804543 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768283752992 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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