Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
With the increasing development of the world, humans are becoming more and more intelligent. Currently, there is a school of thought that some masters, namely doctors and engineers ought to be offered to perform where they were trained. Others claim that it is their choice whether to work in foreign country or not. Personally, I endorse the latter perception and will discuss it in the following paragraphs.
Working in their familiar country is beneficial for the masters in many aspects. The first thing worth mentioning is that the engineers can easily apprehend the principles of the equipment of that nation. Therefore, they will apply the appropriate techniques to repair them in case they are out of work. Another point is that for the doctors, they could clearly grasp the current situation, as well as the common diseases in the country, which allow them to cure the health problems effectively. However, there is a major drawback that they are unable to seize the newfangled techniques or machines from other nations as soon as possible.
Regarding the latter view, the obvious merit for the professional person is that they are able to acquire knowledge from the external countries. They can be guided by the top leading experts of their field or exposed to the up-to-date technology, demonstrating that they will become more and more skillful. On the other hand, the professional ones are capable of assisting the poor country if they choose to serve there. For instance, the doctors could provide support for the poors by supplying them with suitable remedy and medicine. For this wonderful moral responsibility, they could soon receive certificates which will benefit them in the future. A significant point is that they can keep the harmony between the two nations. As far as I am concerned, there are a myriad of countries easing off the situation by sending the top professionals to the other. Opting for working in an unfamiliar country also has its own demerit, it is homesick. Due to the nature of their work, the masters have to stay in that country for about a decade to fullfill their duty. But were I a professional who works in a foreign country, I would assume that all the sacrifices are deserved.
In conclusion, performing in a foreign nation benefits the professionals more than working in a familiar country. Personally, I prefer working outside my country and I recommend people to adopt the similar.
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 78
- It is important for people to take risks in both their professional lives and personal lives Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages 61
- The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed 89
- The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 78
- Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 771, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
.... As far as I am concerned, there are a myriad of countries easing off the situation b...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1070, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...ut a decade to fullfill their duty. But were I a professional who works in a foreign...
^^^^
Line 5, column 1077, Rule ID: I_A[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
...cade to fullfill their duty. But were I a professional who works in a foreign cou...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02463054187 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80918645689 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532019704433 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6250290873 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340898163915 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972112156095 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554930775434 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205059809821 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045901479859 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.