Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Professionals and experts play an important role in the development of a nation, so some people argue that those people should be required to work in their hometowns. I personally believe that everyone has right to choose where they want to work.
On the one hand, it is vital for a country to require talented and accomplished individuals to work in their country where they did their training. Professions like doctors, engineers, researchers are key factors to develop a country as a whole. Their contributions to all sectors are very important so it is reasonable why the state should let these people work in their country. Furthermore, the state often has programs to support educating and training talents financially so governments can remain those people to work in their hometowns. For example, a person who is trained to become an expert in the defensive sector of a nation should serve for the benefits of this country.
On the other hand, I believe that people have the right to work in another countries if they wish. We should be free to choose where we work because this is a fundamental right of humans. It would be wrong to force someone to do the things that they do not want or work in the place that they do not like. Besides, it seems to be not effective if professionals and experts are limited in a nation. These people may continue to research and contribute their abilities to their hometowns but the it is difficult to work effecitvely in the places that are not their desires.
In conclusion, I believe that some profesionals like doctors or engineers could contribute their values and times to their hometowns but it is better to let people choose the place they want to work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
... their abilities to their hometowns but the it is difficult to work effecitvely in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76094276094 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75851087773 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47138047138 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6731928924 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8461538462 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490103680804 0.244688304435 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178713506156 0.084324248473 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990744133376 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318444086666 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691558107989 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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