Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It becomes an agreement among people which according to some should professionals work where they did their train while some else believe they have this chance to select their countries for the job. In my opinion, although professionals have owed to their country, they are free to choose their destinations.
On the one side, governments provide facilities for students to graduate from university. Nations with this method support students who after their study work for companies, organizations and so on which are located in their country. Not only does this provide financial support but also it causes them to have job security and ensure it. besides, immigration costs are very high and most specialists cannot immigrate to other countries for work.
On the other side, immigration and work in other countries make people be updated daily because competition is very high for work. They have lots of challenges during their work but can progress and improve their skills in such situations. In addition, they would learn more languages that help them to communicate with others. Hence, the body prefers work for foreign countries. This happens more in third countries because there is no infrastructure for progress.
Finally, despite there being lots of benefits when a professional works abroad it depends on every person to select the location of his/her job. The sensible method lets people choose themselves either stay in their country and pay what they owe or they would like immigrate. One minus side is all people who have a special career have tendency to leave their countries and it is one of the problems that nations face with it
In conclusion, governments should provide every essential tool for their specialists to stay in the country. Nations should set some strict rules for every person who wants work in another country to prevent this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...re they did their train while some else believe they have this chance to select their c...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are free to choose their destinations. On the one side, governments provide fac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, hence, so, third, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13725490196 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62605237058 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545751633987 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5049367476 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.8 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360371918951 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122114599964 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980516992934 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216096593247 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103200220327 0.056905535591 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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