some people believe that rich countries should provide poorer countries with help that is not financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Time is altering and so is the paramount significance of humanitarian aid for people from walks of life, the world over.Whether caring for needy countries by wealthy is a necessity or not,has sparked a heated debate.Although it is argued by some that these helping should be non financial aid, it is stringently refuted by this essay thanks to this trend's only virtue in terms of surviving people in awful condition without prevailing over their problems.Throughout the following paragraphs,these standpoints will be meticulously srcutinized to advocate the latter adequetly rational oponion.
Having said that providing the basic commodities for poorer nations is inextricably associated with making a fortune, never would anyone ignore this golden opportunity for life, on the one hand.Recent research revealed that yemen people have saved from hungry and disease by international assistances, for example. By shedding some light on this illustration, ignoring an indespensable predominant part that vital relief items can have in deprived areas that is gripped by the worst condition is really superficial.The non financial boon of supporting rich nations, in poverty areas,to help, thus, can catalyze positive effects on people's life. However it is disagreed by this essay.
It is postulated by the majority of people that supporting plaguing poor nations to access the basic necessities of life is inextricably interwoven with temporary relief, changing in requirements are constantly occurring: food to education oppurtunity and water to healthcare.Take a vivacious girl aspire to attending University in the aformentioned previous example. she,undoubtedly, would either drop out before compeleting elementary school in the wake of religous fanatism or recieve fund to study abroad. It is, thus, clearly examplified by the glaringly apparent instance that never is it feasible to provide disadvantaged people with non financial assistance.In spite of the fact corruption is one of the biggest problems that poor nations face,even if rich nations give financial aid, the money does not reach the people who need it,it,hence, is supported that helping to be supplemented by other services to shape hope and independency of poorer area.
To recapitulate, after careful situational analysis, although it is undeniable that non financial support brings with an positive consequence,the role of financial aid, to a great extent, should not be underestimated. Based on the aforementioned compelling grounds, it is hoped this predominantely paramount point will be taken into account by international fund in the foreseeable future, Throughout globe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70202020202 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42004972604 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603535353535 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.669078724 49.4020404114 321% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.888888889 106.682146367 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 20.7667163134 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233434048226 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808201701641 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598681583902 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128358416145 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151761154302 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.4 13.0946893788 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.9 50.2224549098 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.67 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.44 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.