Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
In today’s world, with advancement in transportation, more and more people can travel abroad, which raises a protracted debate with regard to the question of whether tourists should adapt to the culture of the country they visit. Some people think that it is visitors’ responsibility to abide by the host country’s regulations and traditions while others believe that countries should allow foreign newcomers to be the way they are used to. Personally, I agree with both sides and the reasons will be discussed in this essay.
To commence with, on the one hand, adapting to the host nation’s culture will definitely benefit tourists. First, traveling and immersing into a totally different culture is the golden opportunity for visitors to gain firsthand experience and enlarge their range of knowledge. Second, by understanding the local norms and traditions they can avoid unpleasant situation, which may be caused by misunderstandings. Moreover, being able to adapt to the culture will not only prevent newcomers from clashing with local inhabitants but also help them blend well with the local community and develop internationally harmonious relationships.
Furthermore, apart from enriching a person’s travel experience, following cultural practices is compulsory for tourists in some countries. In some parts of the world where cultural rules are fixed, visitors are mandatory to comply with the laws, otherwise, they may be chargeable. For example, in Singapore, it is illegal to chew gum in public places and even tourists can be charged a large amount of money if they break the rule. Another country that applies strict punishment to visitors is North Korea. If you intentionally take photos of military areas in this country, there is a likelihood that you will be criminalized and may have to serve a custodial sentence.
However, on the other hand, it is unrealistic to make people forgo their own customs and traditions while traversing to other countries. Actually, in this time of globalization, embracing cultural diversities from around the world will enrich the host country’s cultures. It is obviously beneficial for local people when they can build strong relationships and learn about cultural beauties from the foreigners. Moreover, becoming more open to different cultures of newcomers will make a country more attractive to tourists, which is profitable for its tourism industry and financial status.
In conclusion, I strongly take the view that both the host country and tourists should respect and accept cultural differences. It is a win-win situation in this economically challenging time because visitors can enhance their travel experience by adapting to local traditions while the country’s economy can gain more profit from tourism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...ises a protracted debate with regard to the question of whether tourists should adapt to the culture of...
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Line 1, column 454, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e the way they are used to. Personally, I agree with both sides and the reasons ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2363.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 431.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48259860789 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06407545868 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5313225058 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 723.6 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6006356846 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.277777778 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9444444444 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27777777778 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309836077425 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971257665653 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888744255349 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17992433535 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747619825732 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 78.4519038076 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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