Some people believe zoos are good places for people to learn about animals. Other people believe animals belong in nature and it is wrong to keep them in zoos. What do you think? Explain, giving specific reasons for your choice.
These days, zoos are becoming a great place for children and adults to visit spectacular animals like lions or tigers. But there have been an argument among many people: are zoos good for both the visitor and the animal or not? In my opinion, zoos might have some downsides but they benefits will be outweigh.
Around the world nowadays, many species are listed in the Red List due to the small number of it kinds, which are caused by the decline of it habitats or by hunters: cheetahs and elephants are endangered animals because many jungles have been burned down for farming or building purpose. So zoos can be a very great place to preserve endangerous species since animals will be protected from other harms. For instance, zoos give elephants chances to easily increase it number thanks to the protection to keep them from predators and foods are being provided every day. Besides, zoos also give scientists the chance to study animal's behavior, which is a great source of information for the government to make different change in law, so not the endangerous animals are being protected by rules, but also their living habitat can be preserved from being destroyed.
But on the other hand, zoos do bring diadvantages to the animal. According to many environmentalists, zoos are artificial so animals lose their instinct for hunting, which means if the government release those animals bach to their natunal habitat, it will be a matter of time before the animals die from starvation or perdators. For example, scientists in China had made an experience: they freed a tiger from the local zoos back to the jungle and attached a camera with it. Many week later, the record showed that the tiger had died from starvation -it couldn't hunted for preys since it hunting skills had been forgotten. And based on the moral point of view, keeping animals in cages is unethical and agained their right.
To sum up, although zoos will change the animals' instinct which seems not to be rational, it still a place that entertaining and educational for children. By using zoos correctly, government can save the endangerous species and their habitat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91184573003 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57879786981 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537190082645 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2040759432 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.357142857 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9285714286 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244201738205 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10272709408 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423948774384 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170592095382 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267267893696 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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