Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People are different from each other in many ways. One such difference is the way of spending life. While some people like to spend their life doing one job or similar routine, others prefer changes in their lives. In my opinion a continuous change in life is the way to live. In the following essay we will discuss both views.
A famous saying is “never drink from stagnant river”. Firstly, some people get bored of same routine. They need change that can either be in job or daily routine. This helps them to take their mind off certain things and explore better options for themselves. For example it is a common trend among Irish people to seek for jobs overseas. This helps them in learning the life better and find better opportunities for themselves. Secondly, some people resort to travelling and living abroad for extended periods of time. Their idea is to take a time off from the same routine and spend some time in foreign culture and understanding different ways of life. For instance many government servants take time off after retirement to travel and enjoy their lives.
On the other hand, some people prefer to follow a strict routine. This is their way of life which has discipline. Such people are generally more career focused and cannot take the risk of discontinuity. For example, If we glance at lives of Buddha monks, their way of life is everything to them. Following strict routines help them to be strong. Similarly many sportsperson follow same routine of working certain hours of the day and focusing on health in the rest of time. Hence the choice depends on individuals thinking.
In conclusion, both views have their own advantages and disadvantages, but most of it depends on personal choices and preferences. In my opinion traveling and continuous change is the way to live in the world as it gives us more chance to explore the world and find better option for our careers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
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Line 4, column 346, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
...strict routines help them to be strong. Similarly many sportsperson follow same routine o...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...focusing on health in the rest of time. Hence the choice depends on individuals think...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82175226586 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57375571333 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522658610272 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1513114642 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3913043478 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3913043478 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.34782608696 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223394823643 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06382387616 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05302919956 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145143168312 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458098926497 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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