Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion?
For a long time, arts has become an elaborate way of communication of humankind, including music. I totally subscribe to the idea that music can manage to connect people more closely, irrespective of cultures and age brackets.
There are several reasons support my belief. Firstly, music does not deliver contents only by language but also tunes. This figure of music can help people from every parts of the world who do not understand foreign language, feel senses and grab the contents somehow, by rhythms and melodies. It is of true possibility that, by listening to music, they can share the same emotion and spirit in a song, it can make them cry, smile or even recall memory together. It is also the reason why people have inclination to send their unforgettable occasion in a song, known as “musical memory”.
Secondly, music is able to erect space geographically and spatio-temporally among people. In the past, an artist sent a memorable story to a song about his contemporary situation back then such as civil war or love story, attached his messages. Listeners, even many years later, could enjoy his song and gain better knowledge about human and society back then as well. Many songs of famous and brilliant artists in the past, which were so meaningful and meticulously composed that they became acclaimed masterpieces ever. By the way of illustration, music is an irreversable way of communication of people of all ages and places of all time.
All in all, for those reasons mentioned above, it is my firm conviction that people in different parts of the world, at various ages, both in the past or at the present can still be intimately connected by music.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, such as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92253521127 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84136385244 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640845070423 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5822014591 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17967279143 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626663515886 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621879978519 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111818108782 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351276727371 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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