Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets, and there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.
Thanks to the popularity of Internet nowadays, every home has Wi-fi and can watch movies with high quality right at their own dwellings with only small charges. Many individuals believe that enjoying films on their technical devices is really time-saving and helpful in saving their pockets because they don’t have to go in crowds to travel to the cinema. On contrary, others reckon that going seeing movies at the cinema is much more enjoyable and realistic as well as happier.
On the one hand, seeing movies at home consumes less time and money. Individuals are given more convenience when staying at their home and don’t have to waste valuable time on traffic jams or waiting to buy tickets at the cinema. Moreover, people only have to pay a small amount of money to buy film services or the right to use apps and they can possess a paramount film storage. Like Netflix, by spending only 180,000 dong per month for purchasing its basic service with a 480p resolution or 260,000 dong for 4K+HDR Premium, consumers can enjoy movies every where and every time they want.
On the other hand, going to the cinema is much more interesting and worthy. It is an ideal way of relaxing and enjoying life with our families or friends. Living in a hustle and bustle life, every human have their own stress and pressure, so spending time going out and getting away from our phones or tablets helps us recover energy and even gain more enthusiasm. What’s more, seeing films in such a big screen is more lively and dynamic, especially experiencing three-dimentional movies. Take me as an example, I only go to the cinema once but this is the most unforgetable moment in my life. I spent all my morning with my little family, which made me treasure and love my life more.
In conclusion, despite the convenience and comfortable conditions when staying at home to enjoy films, going to the cinema is a wonderful way to take joy in human’s hectic life and it is totally deserving.
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Comments
In the 4.0 era with…
In the 4.0 era with available applications like now, I think that is normal
Great experiences watching anime movies
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 555, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...HDR Premium, consumers can enjoy movies every where and every time they want. On the othe...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... take joy in human’s hectic life and it is totally deserving.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, really, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75581395349 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53429692376 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563953488372 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5256047435 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179328778252 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705513913451 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464422751877 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111617274096 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263807668818 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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