Some people say that school children should be mainly taught about the literature (e.g.fiction and poetry) of their own country because it is more important than that of other countries.
To what extend do you agree or disagree.
Some people argue that it is crucial for schools to focus more on national literature rather than on similar works from other countries. While this is valid to a certain extent, I believe that both sources of literature are equally important and they complement each other.
It is understandable why some advocate the view that literature from the home country is of importance to students. The fundamental rationale is that since learners should understand about their own culture and languages prior to others’, they should prioritize to study creative works from national writers. If students do not spend enough time on these internal materials, they may not fully comprehend cultural values of their nation. In addition, supporters of this view assume that if one spends more time on a particular subject such as local literature, the person would know more about that topic. However, these ideas are flawed, as to understand a specific theme of writing, learners should study the subject and also other related entities as well.
In fact, it is vital to study other countries’ literature when one studies their own country’s fiction because different literature in the same era support to understand the piece of writing under study. Authors in similar periods of history typically share common views and materials in their works. Novels and poems about the Vietnam War are prime examples. While the majority of literature from Vietnam during this war is about brave patriots, other writings in the same period are about the drama and lost from the war. They all together depict a better view of the war and the country during that time frame.
In sum, while some advocate that students should primarily learn about their literature, it seems to me that other nations’ documentation is as significant to review.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, well, while, as to, in addition, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20469798658 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73529457349 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546979865772 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0875390911 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.307692308 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255910856778 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899845417448 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554629212495 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160340549133 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329347138285 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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