Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While many people argue that we should adapt to live in the environment including several harsh environmental issues such as climate change, global warming and so on, I believe that it is a good idea but not at the expense of the prevention of these negative shift.
it is true that environmental pollution and conservation are both long-term processes. Therefore, we must have to survive and grow on this planet regardless the level of pollution. In this way, we should create our own shields by wearing masks, coats or even less going outdoor, which help us discourage the impact of climate shift. By doing so, people can make sure their health after the environment that has been recovered.
By adapting with the polluted habitat, it does not mean that we do not act for preventing the climate change. The governments should make laws and introduce programmes to raise the public’s awareness, companies could promote green products to lead green consuming habits. but all policies need everyone’s appreaciation to bring the good results. Highlands coffee shop, for example, introduce the promotion for consumer who bring their own glass cup to drink in particular, which help to curb the use of plastic cup for discouraging environmental pollution. this is one of the programmes of companies by which could change the consumer behaviors and prevent climate change.
In conclusion, it is true that we could find the way to live together with environmental issues. At the same time, we all make every effort to discourage this hard issue that is climate change
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in particular, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11196911197 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88795346044 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3671457936 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212336332055 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813753939404 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747775388992 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134350948939 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030694016087 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.