Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Nowadays, Cutting edge technology could generate people being closer to the society. While others think that the Modern technology make people careless about everyone around them. Well understanding about the cutting edge technology could make people well-informed about the actual information which just happened. While the other who are careless about the technology could make having more time to getting closer in their society.
On the one hand, the cutting edge technology could make the people up to date with every cases that just happened. Further, they could use their technology to make something useful and beneficial for their self. For example, the user of the cutting edge technology could be more care about the world situation since their gadget could give them wide spread information to its user. However, it also make people careless about their around situation since they are too focused in their own social life.
On the other hand, using less of technology could make people more respect about their own environment. Careless about the cutting edge technology generate people to obtain more about the benefits of their own society. For instance, the passive user of technology are tend to socialize with their own real community since it makes more sense comparing to socialize with their fake community in the social media.
In conclusion, using cutting edge could make people be up to date with the global situation while the less using technology could make people more respect to their own society. I believe by less using of the cutting edge technology have a lot of benefits which can be gained and useful to the user.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ate people being closer to the society. While others think that the Modern technology...
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Line 1, column 316, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...actual information which just happened. While the other who are careless about the te...
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Line 2, column 399, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...formation to its user. However, it also make people careless about their around situ...
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Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...nce, the passive user of technology are tend to socialize with their own real commun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12592592593 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40639294865 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.396296296296 0.561755894193 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1380159781 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265898989989 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144119182048 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100389934449 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200562859626 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05243414649 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.