Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. Therefore, it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that it is not worth spending time catching latest news through the media because it seems irrelevant to people’s daily lives. However, I strongly disagree with this opinion and would consider this as a wise use of time in some aspects.
The first reason is that people can make right decisions thanks to updated news from television or reading newspaper. In more details, if the weather forecast program says it would rain heavily on the following day, people will be more well-prepared with a raincoat beside when going out. Another example given is about a piece of news on a policy prohibiting the use of alcohol while driving, which has just been released and announced in the media. Those who catch it would then avoid paying fine by complying with the rule.
In addition, the news media provide information related to current health issues that individuals can take in consideration to protect themselves better. Looking at COVID-19 pandemic affecting severely all over the world, a lot of countries have forced people to practice social distancing and stay at home to reduce the chance of contracting the virus. Therefore, the media plays a critical role in communication during the lock-down period. By watching television, all citizens can be well informed about the occurrence of the pandemic in their location, as well as the way of prevention from be infected.
In conclusion, it is evident that news media covers all aspects of lives so it really brings a number of benefits to those who keep up with the up-to-date one.
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- The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, so, then, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97701149425 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68631288554 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647509578544 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1941504794 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.090909091 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198677971715 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672225193484 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611652550845 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115018246587 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564097640175 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.