Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Many people argue that the best way to obtain news is via reading newspapers. While there are some benefits to acquiring news through newspapers, I maintain that both ways can be used together to acquire news.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that news in newspapers is more truthful than other kinds of media. For instance, on social media, people can share news without any permission, and some of them might be fake news. However, newspapers are administered by the government and verified by the professional team, therefore, the information is more accurate. Secondly, reading via newspapers is suitable for all ages, especially the elderly. Reading newspapers was a traditional way for people to obtain news in the last century. For example, the eldest tend to receive information through journals because it is difficult for them to use media platforms.
On the other hand, there are various reasons why I believe learning news through the media is better. Firstly, social platforms can bring a great deal of information not just about daly news. For example, people can learn about other topics such as: social skills, lifestyle, entertainment,.. which will attract more people especially the teenagers. Secondly, people can stay updated about current affairs around them and the world, thereby making appropriate adjustments. Finally, it is convenient to receive information on a regular basis at anywhere, anytime, through their mobile phone they can easily get access to news.
In conclusion, it seems evident that both learning news through newspapers and social media platforms have their own unique advantages, I believe that both ways are effective ways for people learning news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32592592593 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77803455603 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544444444444 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9827894193 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8666666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443042690336 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151554840497 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11068395651 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291751519513 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538249324717 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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