Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Some would argue that childhood is the most joyful period in one's life; however, others believe that adulthood brings more joy despite the huge burden of engagements. Although being an adult enables people to have more freedom and money to travel and try new experiences in life, I believe that children have more opportunities to be happy because of their innocence and responsibility-free life.
On the one hand, some would say that mature people have more freedom in decision making and more financial resources that enable them spend on leisure and entertainment, such as travelling abroad to different nations where they would try new experiences of life. Also, the buying power is a source of pleasure for this group of people, unlike children who rely on their parents to buy things for them. For instance, a study that was carried out by a group of scientists from Cambridge University revealed that purchasing new items is the predominant stimulus behind feeling happiness amongst mature people.
On the other hand, young people are rather naive, cherubic and have less pessimistic perception to life. That is to say, for a child the most important thing in life is to spend more time in playing with their pals not bothered with any sense of responsibility. What sets children apart is their simplicity and the way how they perceive life in a very optimistic way. They would dream widely and love deeply. For example, a study that was conducted by Manchester University revealed that stress and depression levels amongst adults are higher than amongst young people.
In conclusion, while adults have more authority to make decisions about their life and have more financial resources to spend on leisure and recreational activities, I strongly believe that these material things bring a temporary source of joy and children are far more happier than adults because they have almost no responsibilities and have different view to life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1661971831 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77470651257 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538028169014 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.8790995385 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.076923077 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3076923077 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366112559664 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147955488239 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17740567985 0.0667982634062 266% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269274755393 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.255703616273 0.056905535591 449% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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