in spite of the many advances, women have made in education and employment, they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. in your view, what should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women in the workplace?
There are a lot of discriminations between male and female, despite of women progress in different fields that the career issues like salary and promotion are some examples. In the recent years, some actions have been done to mitigate this problem. However, in opinion there is much that can be done to address the problem constructively.
One possible approach would be consider same rules and defined model for wages and promotions of male and female. In this way, each employee can be evaluate based on the ability, regardless of gender. Nevertheless, measures like this would probably be ignored by finding alternative ways like create the artificial points for men to promote them unfairly.
A more feasible solution would be required to publish the promotion reports every year by human resources departments. It will increase the consciousness of employees about the differences and its reasons. As a consequence, the companies have to try to decrease the unfair inequality based on gender.
To further encourage equality, the government can be consider some bonus for the companies that reduce the gaps between men and women staff fairly. For example, a new factor to calculate a gender equality can be added for tax calculation that should be very interesting for companies to improve their problems in this field.
It is true that the problem of gender inequality in the workplace will probably not be solved quickly. However, that is not a reason to avoid taking action. Governments can encourage change by interesting item for companies like decrease tax for mitigate the problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18992248062 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85874457194 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562015503876 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9299914516 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6428571429 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23499822583 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077783803046 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468519542133 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130382403553 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435715526828 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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