Stress is a major problem in many countries around the word what are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress and how can we reduce it.
Stress is a bigest concern in countries of all the gloab . There are some factor in modern society. This essay will highlight what are the reasons behind this and some solution to resolve it. Tidal articulate in my upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, in present era, first and foremost, people are becoming money minded there are several reasons in this problem folk are soo bussy in tied scadule so they do not spend time with her family a part from that mass are burden of school work in contemporary era school become modern and stylish and these kinds of school provide information teacher are overlood the work provide the student as a result of student do not handle the over preshar
however there are many solution, of this problem first and foremost school teacher are provide homework with games like football, cricket,so on children was feel relaxe Secondly the perents do not presser on the youngest and always their problem situation and adition to that work women they have least work beacuse when they time spend with family they feel happy refresh they have .
To recapitulate, stress is mental condition that is affecting their almost people are responsible for it however folk are take the exercise play games and time spend with family and relatives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, secondly, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97674418605 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33641916392 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 290.178536996 49.4020404114 587% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.333333333 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8333333333 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147849997282 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103533944757 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735238079607 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100322182827 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893434038908 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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