There are an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbours. What causes this situation? How to solve it?
Nowadays, people are more likely to unaware of their neighbourhoods. This essay discusses some of the main reasons behind this trend such as busy life schedule and privacy preferences; and then submits a few plausible solutions specifically organizing social activities and the role of social centres in bringing people together.
To begin with, the social aspect of our lives is ignored because of multiple reasons. Firstly, these days people are absolutely overload with their work and personal lives. Therefore, they do not find spare time to get to know about their neighbours. Secondly, privacy preferences have also changed over the past few years. In other words, many people do not like to share their affairs with other people. As a result, there is less communication among people living in societies. For instance, one of my friends is working on the double shift to meet the financial needs of his family, and hence do not get any extra time to even meet with his close friends.
Besides the above-mentioned issues, nevertheless, a few steps can change the situation. The first and foremost is the promotion of regular social activities. If people are given the opportunity to participate in social events, they would be able to spare some extra time to know about each other. Moreover, community centres can also play a vital role to develop positive social behaviour among people. Community centres provide a common place for residents for social and other leisure activities. For example, the community complex in our society arranges a social event weekly which allows people to know about each other.
In conclusion, it is needless to say that people's preferences at present have resulted in poor socialization, however, continuous happening of social events and local community centres can help people change their behaviour. It is predicted that in the future because people will be busier with their personal lives, the role and responsibility of community centres will also be increased.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ir neighbourhoods. This essay discusses some of the main reasons behind this trend such as ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22839506173 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77785322257 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561728395062 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0136537977 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6470588235 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1764705882 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144780966178 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510826189207 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448041152473 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954409978409 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302769488366 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ir neighbourhoods. This essay discusses some of the main reasons behind this trend such as ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22839506173 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77785322257 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561728395062 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0136537977 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6470588235 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1764705882 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144780966178 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510826189207 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448041152473 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954409978409 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302769488366 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.