These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What are reasons for it. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

It is true that men are increasingly likely to take on a role of househusband, and more women than ever are the breadwinner of their families. In this case, there could be several reasons for this, and I consider it is an extremely positive trend.
First of all, people has had to adapt to various changes in their societies. Equal right movement have made a big progress and it is normal when women are free to pursue their career. On top of that, men are acceptably able to leave their job and look after their children at home without any rumor or criticism of others. Second, both marriage parents had to work and saved money before starting a family. In this case, it is possible that one of them will stay at home when they have kids in order to take care of their children. Finally this decision depends on the personal preference of both parents or it will be based on which partner has the most income.
Personally, this change described above should be seems as progress. We should be happy to live in a society that non women are under pressure and they female worker have equal opportunities as the male one. Furthermore, equal itself only seems fair if men should be free to leave their job in order to assume childcare responsibility if that is what they wish to do. Both mom and dad could make decision of which parental role each one should takes, according to their own circumstances and needs
In conclusion, the changing roles of men and women in the family are the crucial result of wider society and I believe that these develop is desirable.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, in conclusion, first of all, it is true, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56382978723 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4869484777 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8301727658 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191337529508 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693907803257 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627557543753 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106990407292 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677274070368 0.056905535591 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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