While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Agree or disagree
Certainly, vocational training can play a crucial role in addressing the shortage of skilled workers, such as electricians and plumbers. According to recent studies, there is a growing demand for these professions due to the aging workforce and a rise in construction and infrastructure projects.
In the United States, for instance, the Bureau of Labor Statistics projects that employment in the plumbing field will grow by 16% between 2016 and 2026, creating over 75,000 new jobs. Similarly, the demand for electricians is expected to increase by 10%, generating nearly 75,000 job openings in the same time frame.
Furthermore, vocational training can offer many benefits over traditional academic study. For example, vocational education programs are typically shorter and more affordable than traditional four-year college degrees. In addition, vocational training focuses on hands-on experience, which allows students to gain practical skills and job-specific knowledge that can be applied immediately in the workforce.
Moreover, vocational training can help bridge the skills gap and support economic growth. A skilled workforce is essential for industries such as construction, manufacturing, and engineering, and a lack of skilled workers can result in delayed projects and increased costs.
In conclusion, while academic study has its merits, vocational training can offer many advantages, particularly in addressing the shortage of skilled workers in professions such as electricians and plumbers. With a growing demand for these professions and the benefits that vocational education provides, more people should be encouraged to pursue vocational training.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 51, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'skills'' or 'skill's'?
Suggestion: skills'; skill's
...vocational training can help bridge the skills gap and support economic growth. A skil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, similarly, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95041322314 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17190685575 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582644628099 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6137393572 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.909090909 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276942180191 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104061359466 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073259202527 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151716394401 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108535940151 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.23 12.4159519038 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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