why do people prefer supermarkets over local shops?
Over the past few decades, there has been an unprecedented rise in the number of supermarkets. An increasing number of people have claimed that local businesses might not be capable enough to compete with these giants in their backyards. In my opinion, although the increase in the number of supermarkets may affect the local marketplace to some extent, nonetheless it will not endanger the existence of their counterparts.
Since the advent of shopping malls, they have provided solace to each of us. First and foremost, mostly everything starting from kitchen appliances to groceries and cosmetics is available in one place. Thus, there is no need to travel from one shop to the other. Secondly, they promote their products through the medium of advertisements and offering ample amounts of discount on various products available. Thirdly, nearly all malls provide numerous luxuries such as parking areas, self-checkout counter, free home delivery, and many more. Last but not the least, they boom the employment opportunities by anticipating various options ranging from cashiers to their managers.
On the other hand, in the early 19th century, each one of us used to socialize while shopping the essential items. These days a lot of communication gap is there between the seller and consumer. Nevertheless, we have countless ways to socialize via clubs, schools, social events, and through other institutions in society.
To recapitulate, considering the aforementioned points, though the surge in the number of supermarkets has affected the local communities, the effects are not detrimental for their fellow companion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5256916996 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04733598741 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660079051383 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7692307692 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.538461538 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131450008786 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398865973295 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391179586755 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743338759139 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446289443398 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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