The best way to improve health is to do regular exercise. To what extent do you agree?
The most effective method to stay healthy is by doing daily exercise. In my opinion, I agree that the exercise is the key to good health. However, I also believe that diet is important. This essay will discuss about the ways how exercising improves one's health.
Firstly, working out regularly not only lets the sweat out of the body but also releases the toxins from the body. For instance, a simple run or a jog for a mile or two would really intensify the mental as well as physical health. For example, statistics in recent times released by World Health Organization reveals that the youth along with aged people are able to cope up with health problems by staying fit.
Additionally, doing exercise every day helps the mind to stay active and be more efficient in the work life. Furthermore, The relationships with in a family are long lasting without any unnecessary arguments especially, with the life partner. To illustrate, a poll on the internet shows that physical activities also refine the peace of mind which in turn makes the relationships more transparent.
Lastly, Working out along with having a good diet leads to a healthy and longer life. By this I mean, eating less oily foods and cutting the junk from the schedule while sweating out truly shows results. An article from the Times Of India conveys that exercising along with an eating pattern of leafy vegetables and calorie inherited foods makes a person live for another 20 more years unquestionably.
To conclude, Exercise is a proven form to keep oneself healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, really, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i mean, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92395437262 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65215053697 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615969581749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7075741813 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166791132997 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579915565614 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653722262102 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948003966318 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910551537072 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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