The best way to improve health is to do regular exercise. To what extent do you agree?
The most effective method to stay healthy is by doing daily exercise. In my opinion, I agree that the exercise is the key to good health. However, I also believe that diet is important. This essay will discuss about the ways how exercising improves one's health.
Firstly, working out regularly not only lets the sweat out of the body but also releases the toxins from the body. For instance, a simple run or a jog for a mile or two would really intensify the mental as well as physical health. For example, statistics in recent times released by World Health Organization reveals that the youth along with aged people are able to cope up with health problems by staying fit.
Additionally, doing exercise every day helps the mind to stay active and be more efficient in the work life. Furthermore, The relationships with in a family are long lasting without any unnecessary arguments especially, with the life partner. To illustrate, a poll on the internet shows that physical activities also refine the peace of mind which in turn makes the relationships more transparent.
To conclude, Exercise is a proven form to keep oneself healthy. This essay clearly argued that health is achieved by being physically active.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... about the ways how exercising improves ones health. Firstly, working out regula...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, really, so, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97087378641 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70530805582 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665048543689 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0210057391 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206258817238 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069403953457 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649677214978 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118918240553 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892674669699 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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