Despite a large number of gyms, an inactive lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world.
What problems are associated with this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Throughout the history humanity has been trying to follow a healthy lifestyle. In the modern world many fitness centers have been opened, however a number of people adhere to a sedentary way of life. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with a loss of physical activity among individuals and propose some viable solutions to it.
One of the most significant effect of a sedentary lifestyle is obesity causing a number of health problems that decrease life expectancy. It means that due to the lack of activity people are gaining weight and their organs are being covered with a fatty membrane. Moreover, if people do not work out at all, their bodies begin to look unpleasant. Owing to this fact some individuals become insecure and consider themselves ugly, thus then they get depressed and even commit suicide. In other words, an inactive lifestyle leads to serious consequences that shorten a human’s life.
One key solution for the problem of obesity is doing proper physical exercises. Therefore, people need to visit gyms where they will work out according to individual exercise program under the supervision of the coach. Nevertheless, the government ought to provide and propagandize policy that makes fat people lose weight and the example of such policy is represented in China. Talking about unpleasant figures, not only people should try to possess ideal bodies, but also the authorities ought to control and make prices for the membership in fitness centers affordable for the majority. Thus, due to these government measures more and more people will attempt to improve their figures and keep fit that will increase the attendance in gyms.
In conclusion, this essay shed light to the main problems associated with a decline in popularity of gyms and put forward some possible solutions to avoid them
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, talking about, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17056856187 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67180334718 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5591631177 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170981280246 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560602641306 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601579176355 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121001859403 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615168505359 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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