government should spent more money on railways than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Fast and safe mode of transportation plays an indispensable role in the development of the nation. It is believed that governing bodies should spent more on the trains rather than roads. I, however, condemn that government should allocate money equally on both of the means of transportation.
Firstly, private vehicles are more convenient and safe for commuting. Motor vehicles such as car are appropriate for short distances and link between various facilities that people need in everyday life such as hospitals, shopping malls and banks which might not be possible in the case of trains that has fixed station. furthermore, construction of roads can alleviate the problems of accidents to some extent. For example, a recent study conducted in japan revealed that maintenance of roads have reduced the difficulty of accidents due to congestion and traffic jams by 20%.
On other side, trains are more environmentally friendly. Most of the modern trains are fitted with electrical engines which help to combat the problem of pollution. Moreover the fuel which is used in motor vehicle are non-renewable, therefore trains with modern technology are proven to be boon for the development of the country. Apart from this, trains saves the time of passengers who wish to travel long distances, thus it is the fastest means of transportation for far located destinations.
In conclusion, it has been clearly seen that both means of transport has their own importance. So, governing authorities should balance their budget between roads and railway tracks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Furthermore
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...elp to combat the problem of pollution. Moreover the fuel which is used in motor vehicle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32388663968 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98259414315 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623481781377 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2717553767 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.153846154 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168261377891 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657022147205 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850164507638 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109809794385 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798912978267 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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