It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree?
Marriages in early ages is one of the core issues in many parts of the world. Some people prefer to get married before finishing their studies. And some looking to gain job experience before their education completes. I believe this pattern need to be analyzed deeply and should become out of practice from the society completely. The reasons behind this are young adults losing their focus from education after marriage. And eager for finding a job ultimately drop chances for promotions in practical life.
Education must be the foremost priority in anyone's life. Therefore, people should not be distracted from their goals they have established for them. Thinking of marriages in early stage could be very fatal for the future because people are not able to concentrate on both ends. If education needs your undivided attention in order to score good marks, then, on the other hand, marriage seeks huge responsibilities as it is matter of spending whole life with your soulmate. It is mostly evident that people fail to concentrate on education after marriage life and then regression is all they get.
In addition to that, I have seen people who are more inclined towards getting hired by reputed companies. Therefore, they keep applying for the jobs in any of the alleged companies. These people have a mindset that receiving a job offer in the middle of the studies will help them to finance their studies and work experience would matter after finishing their education. These both aspects have positive approach but most people fail to walk on the same wire and fall apart. Because, they are much involved in their jobs that they cannot spare time for studies. After work they are tired as hell and therefore, find their beds and crash on them after office hours. These practices might useful for them in terms of experience, but in future, it will be the leading hindrance in their promotions. This guilt fulled up further when they see their peers and colleagues of their same age and batchmates receiving promotions and surpass them.
At the conclusion of my essay, I urge that education should not be compromised in any circumstances and must be availed at a full strength. Young generations should neither think about marriages nor applying for jobs in their education period because this might excite them for the time being but will haunt them badly in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, therefore, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96268656716 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51774352341 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534825870647 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 617.4 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1249748342 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990058588068 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349432787835 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463696339742 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635840488146 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031821096382 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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