Lesson 17:People should spend their vacations in their own country. Do you agree or disagree?"
First and foremost, planning a vacation in your country gives you the chance to know in-depth local life and culture. To illustrate, Vietnamese citizens are proud of the beautiful landscapes, and long-standing historical sites in their nation. They often are moved by the poverties of the local people, about the children who still don't have access to basic education in some vacations in the mountainous area. Therefore, all will motivate the love ò homeland in individuals
Secondly, there is one undeniable advantage of traveling locally, that is much cheaper. The biggest positive, in my opinion, is that we also know the value of things. For example, we know how much approximately a meal in restaurant costs and other relevant information. Traveling in their own country is usually cheaper than going abroad thanks to the shorter distance that people have to cover. As a result, we don't have to spend as much time recalculating expenses, or even we do not have to break the bank to enjoy a few days on the road.
In conclusion, I believe that saving on traveling expenditures and a source of education about country are the primary reasons for which the majority of people are preferring vacations domestically rather than going overseas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are often
... historical sites in their nation. They often are moved by the poverties of the local peo...
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Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...al people, about the children who still dont have access to basic education in some ...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t people have to cover. As a result, we dont have to spend as much time recalculatin...
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Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...easons for which the majority of people are preferring vacations domestically rather than goin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08737864078 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89600437864 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9502777382 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.444444444 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177431165395 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626617385689 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620551235443 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105186958619 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127090039534 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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