In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
Early ages child like to earn money and sometime they involed some activities which give them amoney as reward. One group of please are in agsing of this where as other group is in favour of this. Both the views will be discussed further befor giving my opinion.
To discuss about the the group which are agints to the view. The formost one is, the focus of childern become loose for the education. They more like to earn money and they don't give proper time and attention to the study. Moreover, at the small age, due to the lake of proper guidence about the use of money they wast it on unncessory things. Sometime it leads to the bad habit also. Afterward it cause the danger to the children life. Furthermore, inappropriate attention of the parents the freedom of expence increase. The things started come to the home which are unnecessary of expencive. For instance, video games, mobile, expencive electronic toys.
However, people of other group are agreed with the view. To begin with, the moral vlaue increase in the children at the very early age. Parents don't need to understand them regarding the value of money and it's importance in the life. Knowledge about reality behind the earning money and hardwork get by self experince. Apart from this, awareness about how to manage the money and expence for the future can get the very early age. At the time of the job after completion of education, they value the job and money. Additionally, it becomes support to the poor family. The icome of the middle class or under the poverty line family can be increase at some level and can fulfill the daily needs properly.
Over all, knowledge about the value of money and work should be improve that basic age which becomes helpful for the parents as well as childerl in fureture. But, it should not by the secrified of education. I agree that childer should have the awareness of money and work before going to the real
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, apart from, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69411764706 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31722898588 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532352941176 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4632884637 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.3913043478 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7826086957 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17391304348 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111721361339 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290081171205 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286635110197 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698304722252 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239194703056 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.