In many countries, as people are earning more these days they are also spending money in buying more and more items. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
In some developed countries, It seems to become normal that people spend more money on goods than ever as the majority of them are wealthy enough in these days. I personally believe that it obviously has a positive impact on various aspects.
To begin with, These increasing spending cultures are most likely to contribute broaden economical aspect. People who receive excellent pay packages, compared to the past, are potentially important customers among manufacturing companies, and their frequent spending behaviors on such company's products will directly result in the profit which can be invested to the development of the new products. In this spending and production systems, not only will the host company be beneficial, but also any other companies related to the new product, such as manufacturing factory or design, advertising firms will have the opportunities to prosper in the future.
However, I believe that this sense of the economic success of the well-spending culture is applicable to another field. If those companies mentioned above thrived as their sales rate increased, this trend would result in job creation and a high level of employment, which can be seen as a positive impact from the perspective of the country. Furthermore, such a strong economy and employment of the nation can help a country's standing on the global stages in terms of its political influence and trading power; America is one of the well-known example of this idea.
In conclusion, it is obvious to me that the increased spending behaviors can have the significantly positive consequences in the various aspect of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26819923372 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94073720207 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.254606863 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.777777778 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146797316769 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612821002937 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728888624581 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993445859794 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086876087744 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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