Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this viewpoint?
It is often thought by many that a variety of curriculum should be taught to the University youth. However, it is argued by some that particular subjects work better toward drawing students attention in study. I firmly agree with the latter view point.
Firstly, tertiary education is meant for specific subject knowledge rather general knowledge in every subjects. Studying of few subjects make learning more effective and increase the efficiency of students. It provide a chance to pupils to focus more on the pivotal area of study which generate curiosity, and attracts interest and enthusiasm. Ultimately, it make students feel more connected towards their major specialisation. In addition, it help students to score high marks in exams, and hence, to achieve their goals in the life. Secondly, some institutes are maintaining their recognition globally and they do not want to struggle with it. For example, "Indian Institute of Technology, Delhi" is a established and reputed institute for research and technical study. Students from abroad come here to take admission to accumulate technical knowledge. what if it makes arts and sociology as compulsory subjects for technical students? Do people think that the popularity will remain the same among them?
Lastly, graduating in major subjects open-up the door of opportunity in term of career path. With upgradation of technology, the demand of highly skilled labours are gradually rising and skill should be only enhanced by mastering few subjects, and therefore, it give more freedom of choice to students in selecting the study and research field. For instance, nowadays, research in medical field is increasingly popular. The need of vaccine for various diseases, namely AIDS and coronavirus are on the top, and this could not be invented by a person acquiring general knowledge in every subject rather it requires some particular skills in medical domain.
To conclude, In my opinion, tertiary institutes are meant for major subjects. Studying few subjects in the university works better towards building a skilled community and nation because it help youth not only in concentrating on subjects per their area of interest but also provoke them to get involved in research and contribute to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41176470588 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86914342975 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9627741642 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.684210526 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7894736842 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247451927516 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698481382485 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456007408774 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152683797915 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409663057918 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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