New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nobody would dispute the fact that shopping online has become much more popular in this information technology age. I hold the view that the internet and online platforms changed our shopping styles significantly.
The reasons why our lives have been impacted by technologies are manifold. Firstly, it is true that electronic devices and the internet have made shopping much easier because they have no time limitations or no geographical requirements. For example, people can purchase products from all over the world, and they can buy everything at any time they want, as stores do not close on the online shopping platform. Furthermore, it is obvious that shopping on the internet is convenient, hence customers can buy goods they need, although they are busy with other matters.
Advanced technologies and fast internet allow store owners to cut down cost, and they can earn more profits. Research suggests that a significant number of business owners choose to start their business online, and they develop their own websites to attract more customers when they have a small budget. In other words, they do not need to invest in physical stores or pay rent every month, which can lead to a big reduction on the cost if they choose an online business approach. For example, Amazon does not have a physical location, and all its services are provided online.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that the internet has tremendously changed our lives such as able to access to products from all countries at any time, convenient, low cost for store owners and a variety of customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...do not need to invest in physical stores or pay rent every month, which can lead ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06870229008 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68432159498 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4468295962 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.727272727 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.067936331277 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315841187896 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299658531922 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0428485106154 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211218992929 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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