New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Although new technical innovations and way of shopping are mending the ways of consumer lives; however,this change is positive in nature. I am fully agreed with the statement and this essay will depict my thoughts on the above topic.
First and foremost, e-commerce is transforming the way of shopping. In the past, consumer goes shop-to-shop for the purchase of certain product in the market. Nowadays, digital stores are providing a single platform where not only the shopper gets the good easily but cheap also. As a result, the traditional method of roam to shop is declining . For instance, Amazon is a worldwide online enterprise where one can buy as well as clothes, books, electronic appliances and so on with ease and without sweating. Moreover, one can get coupons and cash vouchers for choosing their online shopping website rather than other competitors. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favor of this trend.
Secondly, internet is the prime example of advancement in technology which is now part and parcel of everyone's life. Instead of going to any place in search of information, one can get it on internet. Owing to this, the wastage of time and physical effort reduced to a large extent. As an example, if someone wants to visit a hill-station and does not know the location where it actually is than he/she can explore the inter-web to find the location. In this way, nobody can lose their direction to follow. Needless to say, these merits stand in good stead.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that new technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99288256228 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84575075672 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633451957295 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7027708162 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6875 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222581691939 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619211345712 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694549879844 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150999008033 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779719374671 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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