The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing.
What is the reason for the growth of overweight people?
How can this problem be solved?
Nowadays, the percentage of obese people with the risk of adverse health issues is becoming increasing. The potential cause behind this growth is detrimental food habits which could only be treated with a balanced diet plan.
The major reason for the growth of overweight people is their unhealthy eating habits. In other words, people thesedays, are at high risk of obesity which is caused due to their over-indulgence in junk food items. These food products are rich in sugars, carbohydrates, and fats that ultimately increase weight. Taking the recent report of The Guardian as an example; children with the age bracket of 12-18, are more prone to obesity because they continuously eat oily foods such as French fries and Hamburgers. Hence, the utmost cause of gaining weight in people is their bad eating habits.
However, a balanced diet plan with regular exercise is the key to fitness. To be more specific, a proper diet regimen which contains the required quantities of nutrients, proteins, and vitamins can improve the health, if it is followed by a daily physical workout. It would not only help to gain physical health but also to attain mental wellbeing. According to the guidelines of the World Health Organisation, an adequate meal with all essential supplements along with exercise for five days a week could reduce the chances of deadly diseases namely heart stroke and obesity. Therefore, switching to an appropriate diet plan is a possible solution.
In conclusion, although the rate of overweight people has been increasing enormously, owing to their unhealthy eating, yet a balanced diet plan with some physical workout routine can save them from the dire consequences of harmful ailments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dire consequences of harmful ailments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2202166065 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76105557869 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620938628159 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8327284836 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205537582108 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724437414696 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679886593378 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122368456155 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358324737441 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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