sky train
In recent years, building sky train has become a broad issue to the general public. Some people believe that building sky train has many benefits. However, others said building sky train has many drawbacks. In my opinion, I think both views have their own merits. Discuss below are several reasons in favor of my perspectives.
First and foremost, the people should recognize building sky train has many advantages. Firstly, It is convenient for people to transport. Sky train has a way on the traditional way so it can move very fast. We can save a lot of time by going to work. Secondly, when going by sky train, we cannot get into a traffic jam. If we going to work by motorbike or car, we can take a lot of time to move because there are too many vehicles. Finally, going a sky train is very cheap. I think that it is cheaper than going by car or motorbike.
On the other hand, building sky train also has some disadvantages. For example, building a sky train is very very expensive for our country. It takes a lot of money as well as workers for building this. That is only suitable for improved countries.Besides, in some situation, it is not convenient for us. The train stations can be too far from our houses so we have to move to the stations by other vehicle. It costs for us to do this. Moreover, building sky trains can cover the sky in the city. We cannot enjoy the blue sky when we look up.
In conclusion, building the sky train has many benefits as well as drawbacks. Its disadvantages should be taken into account. People should take advantage of the pros and minimize the icon of this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47796610169 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60315147214 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48813559322 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.0509334086 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.0416666667 106.682146367 52% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2916666667 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.487579911512 0.244688304435 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179398064154 0.084324248473 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185463924565 0.0667982634062 278% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330705485452 0.151304729494 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777417705766 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 12.4159519038 63% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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