Some people believe that teaching the children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is essential for the children to go to school.
Discuss both the views and then give your own opinion.
Education methods have always been a controversial issue in recent years. In today’s world, it is argued by some that home training is quite more beneficial for pupils, while others believe that attending schools is a more reliable choice. In my opinion, depending on types of accommodations and facilities we are provided with, both viewpoints could be right. In the following paragraphs, I will address both views and explain my view in more details.
According to the first group, children who have been taught at home and by their educated parents or tutors are considerably reaping more benefits from it. The parents or the private instructors have plenty of time to focus on children’s weaknesses, so this might make them achieve more education and knowledge. Moreover, when children studying at home, they don’t feel themselves in a competition with other students and consequently they can study their lessons with peace and ease. For instance, when I was at high school, I had a classmate who always had lots of problem in solving mathematic questions. After a while, he decided to leave schools and further her education at home. One year later, we surprisingly found that the mathematic prize of our region’s competition has been awarded to him.
On the other hand, some are in the opinion that without going to schools, children would lack of adequate and necessary social skills. They assume that educating is not all about learning and struggling with different sciences, but also is related to learn how to interact with other students and even improve moral characteristics. As an example, one recently published survey in “Education” magazine revealed that students who have continued their study at schools, have been 45% more successful in their future professions and even they have had happier marriage.
To conclude, opinions vary on the aforementioned issue. To me, however, it is completely clear that transactional behavior and education goes hand in hand and in the case of availability of required facilities, registering our children at schools would be much logical decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09796227256 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3302499109 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.133333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240452606412 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792941507938 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544561113225 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140557916675 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452262205709 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.