Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.
-How far do you agree?
-What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?
There is an opinion that (nurses, doctors and teachers) underpaid - who work do not earn enough money from their jobs regarding famous actors and company top-managers, who paid an enormous amount of money. Thus, difference between the importance of the work and salary is out of proportion considering the complexity of their job.
First, I would like to say that some doctors and teachers are paid big sums of money as well as celebrities. Undoubtedly, they do much harder and responsible work and they must understand deeply what they do and what they have already done. Moreover, these people have to be highly educated and keep their studying as long as they work. Nevertheless, they can work and earn money while they can perform their duties whereas film actors may be forgotten in a short period and never earn enough money again. Unfortunately, however there is still a lot of high-level doctors, nurses and teachers who are underpaid in our country.
Secondly, I think that all jobs should be paid according to their importance and complexity and social workers’ salary should be reviewed in general. Actually, it is hard to evaluate some professions, such as journalists, actors, painters and historians, who do not have tangible benefits. In this case, people should earn as much money as well they present themselves and their income.
To sum it up, I would like to say that it is sometimes hard to understand how to calculate a salary for some professions and many people should learn how to be competitive on a job market to earn more money
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...pinion that nurses, doctors and teachers underpaid - who work do not earn enough ...
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Suggestion:
...painters and historians, who do not have tangible benefits. In this case, people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, whereas, while, i think, in general, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1299.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92045454545 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77616360679 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1125159882 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.090909091 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1818181818 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268948078761 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104967904085 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775146079757 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168270218193 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151396651002 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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