Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.
Modern technology has become the part of our everyday life and has displaced many traditional and conventional methods, therefore, it pose the threat on local newspapers and magazines. It is argued that E-books will completely take the place of traditional newspapers and magazines. I do not accord this notion completely. I will justify my opinions in the following paragraph with examples.
There is no doubt about it, Modern technology have become prevalent in society. This is because it provides ease and comfort in everyday life. For instance, automatic dish cleaner, microwave oven and automatic washing machines save a lot of time and effort, which takes several hours to do it by hand. In the same way, innovative technology is shifting the traditional trend of reading newspapers and books. People can now benefit from latest technology and e-books with updates of news and current affairs. Moreover, millions of e-books are available on internet to download on handheld devices. Newspapers brands are providing subscription to read daily news on mobile phones, which can be forwarded to other people.
However, Traditional methods of reading are still people. Firstly, many people have ardent habit of reading newspaper people daily with a cup of tea in the morning. They think that true essence of reading is on hard books. Secondly, it is still the easiest and cheapest method of knowing about daily activities, as it does not require electricity and expensive mobile phones and tablets. Furthermore, mobile phones and tablets can have adverse effect on the eye sight. Many people feel uncomfortable by constantly looking at screens. For example, blue rays from handheld devices can cause headache, migraine, and dizziness when use for longer period of time.
In conclusion, Innovative technology cannot substitute conventional newspapers and magazines completely despite the numerous benefits provided by E-books and internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: poses
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Suggestion: from the latest
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Suggestion: peopled
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Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44370860927 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84094382203 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592715231788 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1940210276 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5263157895 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.68421052632 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214802464847 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061909498401 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055194730843 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140273499745 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528204089011 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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