Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that artists should be funded by alternative sources.
These days, creative skills are rare to be found. Although many would argue that skillful artists such as painters and musicians should be economically supported by authorities; however, I think that alternative sources like exclusive auctions art galleries and band camps are best for financial support. This essay will depict my thoughts on the above topic.
First and foremost, monetary aid is must for the artistry to be promoted and private sell-off as well as concerts are best suited for the particular purpose. Not only these help in showcasing their talents but also value the art of theirs by money they got through appreciation. As a result, the motivation and creativeness to do something new remains prevalent in the creator. For instance, a research conducted by a World Heritage and craft association shows that the sketcher and singers of Paris get the highest pay-outs through these privately owned shows. Needless to say, these creative platforms can give the artists the worth of their artwork.
On the contrary, Government should give a helping hand to these maestros by bringing some money based policies.Owing to this, a cash based system can come into existence which leads to the future security of these masters. Moreover, public art galleries should organize some general craft fairs to inspire the skilled individuals so that they come forward and flaunt their crafts.Hence, it is apparent why administration part cannot be ignored.
To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that private funding to painters and musicians is instrumental indeed. Nevertheless, the government help should not be overlooked either.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39700374532 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93988644163 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640449438202 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.5949435157 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1666666667 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290811567825 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906815005199 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971174006562 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172099563689 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914117881557 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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