Some people think that people can be encouraged to take up sport through sporting events such as Olympics. However, others think that there are better ways to encourage adults to do exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is thought by some that major sporting events such as the Olympics encourage people to do sports while there are others who consider that adults can be motivated to engage in exercises in other ways. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the latter.
If we consider the benefits of having sporting events to encourage adults to do sports, firstly, people can be easily motivated and inspire by letting them see the actual success of the world-class sportsman and their exiting way of living. Moreover, a healthy and active lifestyle of such personals is a promising factor to motivate adults. For example, their well-formed bodies and recognition the stars receiving all over the world can ignite the passion for sports and exercise in many. If there are no chances for people to experience such events, people cannot see and feel the actual benefits of sports and healthy life. Secondly, not only adults but also children get inspired and as a result, in the future, they will automatically adapt to a healthy and active lifestyle.
On the other hand, we should take into account that holding such event in a country is an extremely expensive task, as well as not many, can even afford to buy tickets to see such event. Instead, governments can use that money to advance existing sporting facilities, building new facilities and promoting sports. In addition, to increase enthusiasm, governments can reduce the prices of healthy foods such as organic diets and sports equipment. Conversely, people are always thinking about money when it comes to involving in any sport or activity, therefore, it is more beneficial to offer the financial benefits to people without wasting exponential amount of money to host sporting events. As a matter of fact, to motivate an adult to do something new, money plays a profound role.
In conclusion, although there are some benefits of having prime sporting events, the proper investment of money to develop sporting facilities and giving financial advantages to people are more effective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10746268657 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68457637683 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558208955224 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.60953147 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.615384615 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.9230769231 7.06120827912 254% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37202296347 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120917197859 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961568754935 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238669536975 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702046297738 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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