Some students work while studying. This often results
in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure.
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Some pupils have to do part-time jobs after school to follow their education. This leads to the fact that they may struggle with stress and run out of time to finish their curriculum. This essay will discuss the causes of this issue and suggest solutions to it.
In fact, there could be two main reasons why students have to work while studying for their own future. The most important one could be financial need. For example, they need to satisfy their personal demand such as food, books, and entertainment. Besides that, financial support from family may be just enough for school fees but not for the cost of living. The second one is to get relevant real-world experience and crucial soft skills. Nowadays they usually take internships through which they would have more chances to study, make money, and have more job opportunities for their future career.
Fortunately, there are many possible solutions to this problem. Firstly, people can donate study materials and financial budgets for poor students. We can give practical things for instance educational toys, some useful books to help them improve their knowledge. Furthermore, the educational system should encourage them to get scholarships through contests to help them have more motivation. In VN, secondary students can participate in Olympia in which the winner can have a chance to study abroad. This leads to the fact that they don’t need to work anymore because the scholarship will give them enough money to study.
In conclusion, the students may feel exhausted because they are overloaded with their jobs and examinations. However, some suggested solutions can probably solve this problem for a brighter future for students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21014492754 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60502963017 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8684454614 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5882352941 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88235294118 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236210105895 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807186732273 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644772313626 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163989417479 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531632215694 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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