What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?
These days, immigration is becoming extremely popular in Kazakhstan for its benefits. However, some social workers state that it also causes many problems to applicants. In this essay, I will consider both the pros and cons of this.
Let us start with advantages of moving to another county to live or study. The first positive side is that it allows people to improve their quality of life. Relocation usually enables immigrants, who can neither get employed nor work high-paid jobs in home country, to change their life standards for the better, because they can find better employment opportunities. Another merit is that it helps young people receive excellent education. Many students, for example, in Kazakhstan are dissatisfied by the quality education in home town, but with help of immigration, they can acquire a degree in recognized colleges abroad. Therefore, it is clear that leaving your country has many advantages for both job seekers and students.
Despite these advantageous sides, relocation to live or study has many drawbacks. Firstly, it does not guaranty the improvement of living standards. Many people, who change citizenships, fail to build a new life overseas, since it is frequently difficult for newcomers to obtain desired jobs. Secondly, it normally make students homesick. The majority of students miss home, when they leave their motherland to study in other countries, since they seldom see both their relatives and close friends. As a result, it is obvious that people face many problems, if they decide to leave their country.
In conclusion, even though changing citizenship for either residing or studying has many beneficial effects on immigrants, It also creates many hindrances for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34306569343 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80605436032 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649635036496 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5182530718 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157045953449 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524278032783 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732267854049 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762523555022 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595116204943 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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