2) Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
views differ when it comes to honesty in relationship between people. some people are inclined toward the opininon that any person in his relationship should tell the truth. However, others may takes an opposite viewpoint and believe that it is not obligatory for people to tell the truth in their relationship. In my perspective, there are numerous advantages in telling lie which I will pinpoing my outstanding reasons in the following paragraphs.
The first point worth mentioning is that it is plausible to make our partner upset by telling the truth. Nowadays, many families have a hectice life which forced them to spend most of their time on working and earning money. Because there are extreme competition for jobs many people become fire and their position will fill by other people. A person that losed his job, will hurt his partner by telling the truth. Therefore, it is better for their life if a person do not tell the truth and after finding another job tell that he was fired from his previous work place. Moreover, Telling the truth in a family which has a lot of financial problem will lead to fight between their member. So, truth will damage their relationship and increase their problem which is not healthy for their relationship. For instance, my cousin has difficult situation in their family and since they had alot arguments in their home, he did not tell about the result of university's entrance exam which was really embarassing.
The further more subtle point is that there are plenty opportunities in lying which will make other people happy. It is obvious for every person that honesty is the best policy but by being honest all the time, people miss the chance to surprise other person. For example, my brother did not tell the truth to his wife and arrange a surprise party for her. She was really upset and thought his husband forgot her birthday. When she came to home, all her famlily surprised her and make her verry happy. Hence, sometimes telling lies is essential for people since it provides excellent chances to make other happy. Also, many people have a low self-esteem in modern era which make them do not feel great about themselves. for instance, by saying harmless lie such as you look pretty or your clothes are fascinating, we can ehnance their good feeling.
to make a long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, since it will harm other people and make opportunities thay will help other people, it is beneficial for all people to tell lie for somtimes.
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- TOEFL Sample essay integrated essay from TPO5 3
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83564814815 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51443769161 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509259259259 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8457592855 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4761904762 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230008057628 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834218864826 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697372993545 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165811263137 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937375376197 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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